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the wreck of goodwill

the wreck of goodwill

every dime counted
seemed to count itself
but the pennies were the trouble spot
and the cost of all goodwill.

— Zumwalt (1998)

Comments on: "the wreck of goodwill" (12)

  1. Norma Martiri's avatar
  2. granbee's avatar

    Excellent verse about our common failing to “pinch pennies”, causing much unncessary negativity and friction! Thank you for such a pointed reminder about the troubles fretting over money causes in this world.

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  3. saffronsound's avatar

    such a wry little package, this poem is…behind brevity, there it lays, a smirk and a nod and sad shaking of heads…

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  4. Unsungpoet's avatar

    Power-packed message!

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  5. Poet Art's avatar

    I liked this, so much said with so few words. Right on.

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  6. Sharmishtha Basu's avatar
  7. Monica's avatar

    Boy, those were the days, when a dime counted and pennies had something besides nostalgic value. I note that a ride on the horse at the grocery store still costs one cent!

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  8. abichica's avatar

    i have been gone for a while now, but i am back now, wonderful poetry, i always learn a lot from your poems and the way you create!! wooww!!! 🙂

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  9. poetofmidnight's avatar

    So brilliant and witty! I’d love to nominate you for the Reader Appreciation Award.

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  10. WordsFallFromMyEyes's avatar
    WordsFallFromMyEyes said:

    So much in so little. Very clever.

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  11. Tarisai's avatar

    Hi, I know it’s late but I nominated you for the “Blog Of The Year” award. Check it out:

    Blog of the year 2012 award

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  12. Sons of Thunder's avatar

    So many pennies, so little time…
    “Been ? What ? Nearly a year now?
    Hurry Back…
    ~Happy New Year~

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